continuation of thought from 'Too Close?'
A response
This poem will be deep;
Sky deep and Ocean high
with meaning.
And
Nothing to hide means
everything to hide.
But.
You are mistaken in logic.
I have no idea how you feel.
-the bard 10/12/05
This poem will be deep;
Sky deep and Ocean high
with meaning.
And
Nothing to hide means
everything to hide.
But.
You are mistaken in logic.
I have no idea how you feel.
-the bard 10/12/05
posted by Todd at 11:16 AM
2 Comments:
nicely done. I especiall like "sky deep, ocean high". you really captured the ambiguity of poetry and how sometimes its claims to be honest only serve to confuse the situation even more
this one grabbed me todd. cheers.
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