Response to "The Beginnings"
Added lines:
I was reciting the poem to myself in my head and started ad-libbing, however, I haven't actually said it out loud yet. I'm still in the editing phase of course.
"The Things I Will Not Do Today:"
This is intentionally sarcastic. I had recently been rebuked (somewhat unfoundedly) for questioning someone's doctrinal beliefs. I was a bit upset by the response, and I wrote this. The serious lines are interspersed with false ones, so its really up to you to decide which voice is actually mine.
I was reciting the poem to myself in my head and started ad-libbing, however, I haven't actually said it out loud yet. I'm still in the editing phase of course.
"The Things I Will Not Do Today:"
This is intentionally sarcastic. I had recently been rebuked (somewhat unfoundedly) for questioning someone's doctrinal beliefs. I was a bit upset by the response, and I wrote this. The serious lines are interspersed with false ones, so its really up to you to decide which voice is actually mine.
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