The Beginnings

I like the set-up, but perhaps you could right a bit about "The Things I will not do today". O ya, and make sure you always label every poem's author. That way everyone knows for sure who wrote what (and possibly when). Personally I think I will tag mine "-the bard", so feel free to do whatever you want. I am interested to hear how these poems sound in a performance style rendering. I must say I am a little uneasy about the added lines in "un-Deliever" (brother, sister , father, mother) Do you think they are necessary?

We can debate that one later. I'm gonna post a couple crucial Society Poems.

-the bard